I have seen similar versions of this so be cautious of that. The idea is cool though. I'm not so sure about the outlining of the "i" though. I know it transitions into the ones going in a circle but it looks like you cropped it and just forgot to embed the file or something. Consider brighter colors for those? Also in the 10th and 11th slides, I dont't know how I feel about the type being outlined in red. See how it looks with a glow background or shadow?
I have seen similar versions of this so be cautious of that. The idea is cool though. I'm not so sure about the outlining of the "i" though. I know it transitions into the ones going in a circle but it looks like you cropped it and just forgot to embed the file or something. Consider brighter colors for those? Also in the 10th and 11th slides, I dont't know how I feel about the type being outlined in red. See how it looks with a glow background or shadow?
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